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Past-Chaser, May 21st, 2014, 10:33 pm ( Reply )

- And So Ends Chapter 3.

See you in a few weeks for chapter 4!!

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Ohhh my god, such a precious scene. His teary eyes~ Seriously I'm gonna cry. ;___;

I really love this story now, it's growing on me. :)

posted by M-24 on May 22nd, 2014, 5:33 pm





 
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Aw, it's nice to see he's starting to come out of his depression now. And Gramps is being very supportive, which is nice to see. And I love the snarky exchange between them about the hat, too. Nice to see they can share a moment without being mushy and serious the whole time. I look forward to seeing where the story goes from here!
There's also something I've been meaning to say for a while. I do love your art, but something about Gramps' face doesn't seem right. I think it's the outline. Old faces tend to sag, but the outline of his face looks smooth and firm. It's up to you how to handle it, I just wanted to mention that.

posted by melaredblu on May 23rd, 2014, 3:13 am





 
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@M-24: glad to hear it!

posted by Past-Chaser on May 23rd, 2014, 10:54 am





 
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@melaredblu: unf grampys face gives me a ton of trouble (hes so inconsistent OTL)

the problem has been with me trying to slowly age him throughout the chapters while also trying to learn how to draw aging faces at the same time, but I think youre right! Chapter 4 skips a few years again (last time i swear) So I'll try to be putting that into practice!

posted by Past-Chaser on May 23rd, 2014, 10:58 am



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