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The fire throughout the entire page was a very cool idea. The warm colors are perfect and the transition from the "AWAY!" panel blending into the gutters is especially smooth.
I think the panel where he's cringing from the flames might be a bit too small and shoved off to the side. It lacks the impact you're going for.

posted by melaredblu on June 13th, 2013, 11:09 pm





 
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@melaredblu: I wad worried it may be too bright so Im glad thats not something I have to worry too much about. The panel was meant to be small and "lost", but I think you're right...perhaps it should have been moved down more as well, idk, I kind of suffered from "ran-out-of-time-itus" this page so it suffered a but XD

posted by Past-Chaser on June 19th, 2013, 9:43 pm



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